Putting the Pieces Together
She's walking down this winding path,
with so much on her mind.
She goes over all she's come across,
and lets everything unwind.
She's trying to comprehend it all,
her life is coming fast.
Should certain things still be concerns,
or should it all lie in her past?
I'm walking about this pathway
hearing voices amidst each step.
I listen to them carefully.
I've heard them and often wept.
I wish I knew the solutions
to questions eating me away.
Will these feelings ever dissappear,
or will they forever stay?
She's left wandering and lost on this course
When will it all straighten out?
But then she realizes
something good Can come about.
She asks for strength in her life
for without help, she'll most likely stray.
With weeping eyes, and a broken heart
she gets down on her knees to pray.
"Please help me in these times,
while I'm struggling to be strong."
"I'm sorry for my weakness,
with help, I know I'll heal before long."
She knows he's been beside her
as her soul slowly fell apart.
He took track of all the pieces,
and now, began to fix her heart.
Every time she thought of him
and asked for help each day,
He took another broken piece,
comforting; making things okay.
He knows her more than anyone.
He loves her with no end.
He wants so badly for his child,
to be happy; for her heart to mend.
As we struggle down this winding road,
let him, your forever friend be with you.
He'll help you through any trial
let his joyous light shine through.
... Okay, Well, I'm sorry if you find this unbearably cheezy, but it helped a little bit.... Unfortunately, I must go to class now!
Have a wonderful day to all of you who read this. I guess to those who don't, it'd be great if they had a splendid day as well!
with so much on her mind.
She goes over all she's come across,
and lets everything unwind.
She's trying to comprehend it all,
her life is coming fast.
Should certain things still be concerns,
or should it all lie in her past?
I'm walking about this pathway
hearing voices amidst each step.
I listen to them carefully.
I've heard them and often wept.
I wish I knew the solutions
to questions eating me away.
Will these feelings ever dissappear,
or will they forever stay?
She's left wandering and lost on this course
When will it all straighten out?
But then she realizes
something good Can come about.
She asks for strength in her life
for without help, she'll most likely stray.
With weeping eyes, and a broken heart
she gets down on her knees to pray.
"Please help me in these times,
while I'm struggling to be strong."
"I'm sorry for my weakness,
with help, I know I'll heal before long."
She knows he's been beside her
as her soul slowly fell apart.
He took track of all the pieces,
and now, began to fix her heart.
Every time she thought of him
and asked for help each day,
He took another broken piece,
comforting; making things okay.
He knows her more than anyone.
He loves her with no end.
He wants so badly for his child,
to be happy; for her heart to mend.
As we struggle down this winding road,
let him, your forever friend be with you.
He'll help you through any trial
let his joyous light shine through.
... Okay, Well, I'm sorry if you find this unbearably cheezy, but it helped a little bit.... Unfortunately, I must go to class now!
Have a wonderful day to all of you who read this. I guess to those who don't, it'd be great if they had a splendid day as well!

5 Comments:
At Tuesday, April 11, 2006,
Babs said…
P.S. I like you guys a lot too! "Yes, it's truuuueeee!"
At Tuesday, April 11, 2006,
deb said…
You just amaze me. That is all that I can say.
At Tuesday, April 11, 2006,
Nikki said…
That's going to become famous like that "Footprints" poem. How long did it take you to write that? Is it a final draft?
At Tuesday, April 11, 2006,
Babs said…
And once again... I Like you guys. THat was my gap of time between 9:00-9:50 because ceramics was super short today. Nope... umm.. wow, I haven't really thought about any of that... I could possibly make it into a final draft...
And... I got my camera! Yay! I'l have to blog w/ a real picture of my very own on it!
At Wednesday, April 12, 2006,
micquel said…
That took you less than an hour?! But the content, the rhyme! Pardon me, but that is amazing. Teri, Teri, I like-a you, too. we should hang out all the time.
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